It is important for all town and cities to have large outdoor public spaces such as squared and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this day and age, citizens have been constructing a myriad of public areas in the world. In my opinion, it is really indispensable for all countries to build these open premises, because they could bring a great number of advantages for the community.
On the one hand, that towns and cities have huge squares and parks is believed to be one of the best ways to improve citizens’s health. Firstly, in this modern world, the majority of individuals have to shoulder tremendous burden of work and study, leading to their mood disoders and anxiety. The appearance of parks and squares can help them relieve their stress effectively by providing a place for individuals to meet friends and do exercises. Secondly, people have been building a lot of trees in the park. It is undeniable that they could help reduce the quantity of dust in the atmosphere as well as avoid environmental problems. Due to that, citizens could enjoy better health.
On the other hand, the open premises have been acting as a catalyst for the improvement of finance in the majority of towns and cities. Some squares are claimed to be the soul of the cities, helping dwellers gain profit. For example, Lam Vien Square, which is located in Da Lat City in Vietnam, attracts millions of tourists over the world on an annual basis. As a result, people can gain money by selling souvernirs or local gifts in these public areas.
In conclusion, the open places could help people relingquish exhaustion and gain money. Therefore, I totally side with the opinion that it is really important for towns and cities to build public premises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85869565217 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64083214801 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5951070033 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244182543266 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763686489733 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631586979645 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145949617512 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228564096001 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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