In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, or animal products for clothing and medicine, for example. Do you agree and disagree with this statement?
In this day and age, inviduals have been making a lot of products from animal. However, in my opinion, I totally side with the opinion that we no longer need to use animal for producing food, clothing and even medicine.
On the one hand, it is not indispensable for dwellers to consume meat and wear animal clothing. Firstly, without meat, people still enjoy a good health as becoming a vegetarian. A plant-based diet not only provides sufficient nutrients for body to function normally, but also helps prevent various potential health issues such as diabetes, high blood pressure or heart attacks. Secondly, with regards to clothing, artificial fur and high-quality synthesised fabric, which are still high-quality, can replace animal clothing. They could also help dwellers save money, because they are cheaper.
On the other hand, animal testing is no longer essential in the medical field. Thanks to the development of technology, it is highly likely to replace animal experimentations with sophisticated computer programs which could provide more accurate results. For instance, some scientists has used a software called “Virtual Assay” to test the safety of new drugs and has proved effective. Therefore, it is unnecessary to examine medicine through animal testing.
In conclusion, I think it is not important to kill animals for products. In lieu of that, individuals can replace them by vegetarian food, artificial clothing materials or computer simulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46956521739 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97729276554 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686956521739 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8908132732 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317495853721 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102456847609 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796437632725 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194668470513 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599736863724 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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