Nowadays museums have become more and more important. What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded?
In this day and age, people have been building a lot of museums in the world. In my opinion, these places play a crucial role in life and there are various ways to fund them.
On the one hand, building museums acts as a catalyst for the improvement of education and finance of community. Firstly, the fundamental purpose of exhibitions is to provide first-hand experience of antiques or artworks for visitors. Due to that, citizens can connect what they have learnt via books with the reality, which can help stimulate their enthusiasm in widening knowledge. Secondly, museums have been attracting a great number of tourists over the world, which helps the finance of the city witness an escalation. Quang Ninh museum, which is located in Quang Ninh province in Vietnam, is a clear proof of this situation.
On the other hand, there are some solutions for tackling with the inadequate funding for the exhibitions. The governments should pay attention and allocate an appropriate proportion of the treasury to local museums. They can increase tax for serving these places. Moreover, the galleries should exploit the potential market by selling souvenirs such as booklet or badge. By this way, the museums do not only gain money by themselves but also help the visitors meet their demand.
In conclusion, I believe places like museums are really indispensable in our education and finance. To deal with the funding of these galleries, both the governments and citizens should take action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08979591837 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73391399175 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4551243259 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220770855707 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671671186989 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266356933962 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131076404533 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011301834856 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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