There is more and more violence in movies and on TV, therefore it is necessary for the government to control the amount of it to decrease the violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, television has been playing a crucial role in life. However, there are various movies relating to violence on television. In my opinion, the authority should limit them to reduce the number of people commiting crimes.
On the one hand, violent contents could easily affect detrimentally on individuals. It is undeniable that the majority of viewers on television are children who cannot distinguish between right and wrong. Due to that, not only could children imitate negative actions but also commit an offence when they grow up. With regards to adults, if they watch too much violent movies, they could also become aggressive. For example, in Korea, which is a famous country with violent movies, the rate of the elders being sinful has reached 45%.
On the other hand, banning channels relating to violence acts as a catalyst to solve the problem of criminals effectively. A great number of countries deal with this issue by hiring more policemen. However, they just help take offender into the crime in lieu of preventing dwellers from being guilty. This solution could not help people desire result, but it is also prohibitively expensive. Therefore, it is necessary for the government to control the violent contents.
In conclusion, most of the criminals are the culprit of watching too much violence on television. As a result, the authority should limit this content to solve the issue of crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09787234043 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67378332099 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.4011493873 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128708392952 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454332084286 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686243042321 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698262933208 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518994086754 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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