It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
Outerspace such as squares and parks is a necessary element for all cities and towns. While these outdoor places have some negative consequences, I agree with this statement. Parks, playgrounds, and such open spaces are highly required for the town's people for their mental and physical health, social needs, and spending quality time.
On the one hand, people cannot stay in a confined space for all time as it affects their mental health, for which they cannot more likely focus on the work. For this reason, outer space is an integral part of society. Outdoor places, for example, parks, playgrounds, and beside the riverside are needed for all towns. Additionally, to ensure the children's physical and mental growth, this space is required. Moreover, a community can meet together or arrange a party in these outer places which can assist in strengthing social bonding.
On the other hand, as the population is escalating significantly, especially in towns for jobs and business, the town is suffering for enough accommodation. For instance, Canada faces badly for this issue, and huge migrants need to leave this country, So, to cope with this problem, outer space can be used by making it into houses and buildings. Additionally, shopping malls or any industries can be built instead of these outdoor places which can help in boosting the economy.
In my opinion, it is true that more space is needed for the town to meet the economic demand but it should be the top priority to ensure the citizen's proper needs and entertainment. Apart from this, park, riverside, and playground enhance the city's natural beauty. As an unhealthy city never being blessed for a country, these outdoor places are the most essential element for the town.
In conclusion, outer space like square and park, playground and so on is the indivisible part of a town and society. Every town and cities should construct and make the outerspace more attractive and eco-friendly which will help both the citizen and environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...places have some negative consequences, I agree with this statement. Parks, play...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07228915663 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68737498739 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0166769848 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251099396781 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947639684406 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528102939885 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159119653366 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448278574929 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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