The best way to learn about other cultures is to work in multinational organizations. Do you agree or disagree?
A major benefit of globalization is different nation get opportunities to work in multinational companies. Working in multinational industries is the most suitable way to know about other cultures. I agree with this statement insofar as working together can exchange the cultures and this is the best way to know about colleagues of different nations and their cultures direclty. This is the only way i believe, can know different culture in same time. However, a single or a group of person never explicit the whole culture of the nation. So it is difficult to know the whole culture by working with a group of people.
Firstly, globalization makes it very easy for the people from different places to work together. Most of the multinational companies has the employees from different countries. They need to collaborate with others to grow up in the workplace. This can help people to get a live experience of other cutures together. In a single time, it is possible to gather knowledges of different culture as they are communicating with each others with different nations together. To cite an example, in google, more than 100 countries people are worked there. In there, they are more likely gather knowledge of all countries cultures by working. If someone want to know the same knowledge of different culture, it is more likely to visit all different countries, is the hardest way to know other cultures.
Moreover, one can get idea about other colleagues' food, style of communication, festivals, language and clothes that reflect the culture of this staff. This is the cheapest and short way to learn other cultures.
However, a group of people never elicit the whole nation's culture. In every countries, different nations are live, has the different culture. Additionally, in multinational companies, working staffs are well educated and follow the global and standard rules rather than own culture. So it is difficult to learn different cultures by doing jobs in a multinational organization.
To sum up, while it is less likely possible to learn completely about the cultures of a nation, working in multinational company creates more opportunities to experience, feel other cultures directly. This is the most straight and best way to gain knowledge about other culture.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colleagues'' or 'colleague's'?
Suggestion: colleagues'; colleague's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1747311828 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97505114211 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430107526882 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0935115626 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321347043672 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107867462157 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847182900814 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213733011516 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885371945517 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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