Topic: It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places
like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The initiative to promote outdoor spaces in metropolitan areas has gained in popularity in recent years. Even though these public places might result in a minor uptick in crimes, I personally support such forward-looking policies considering their potential effects on the community.
On the one hand, minor infractions may experience an increase in public areas. A specific example of this is the case of Nguyen Hue pedestrian square in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. Since its officially public in 2018, the square has attracted millions of visitors all year around, particularly at special festivals, who enjoy strolling, gathering with their friends and having quality time together with their families. As visitors are tightly packed in the space and may be distracted by their buddies and beloved ones, they are likely to become targets for criminals such as pickpockets. Indeed, this is not only a loss for the unfortunate victims but also ruins the image of a safe and hospitable Ho Chi Minh City.
On the other hand, it is apparent that outdoor spaces are beneficial to physical health. There are many parks, gardens, and spares that provide an abundance of freely accessible resources for exercise. For example, those in Hanoi typically offer residents with exercise equipment and fitness facilities which often come free of charge. In addition, public areas are generally filled with plants, fostering a greener atmosphere and offering visitors a refreshing escape from the pollution that they must frequently endure in densely populated cities. Recent policy research into this area has shown that residents in the vicinity of public spaces tend to exercise more regularly, thus enjoying overall better health.
In conclusion, in spite of the threat of petty crimes, I would opine that public spaces should be encouraged in every city and town to promote healthier lifestyles. It is therefore advisable that city planners should allocate at least 20 percent of the total development area for green spaces or public areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ercent of the total development area for green spaces or public areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30555555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7283025374 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632716049383 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.262499683 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191144886413 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563920142077 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234193159304 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101825248736 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311810078946 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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