It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
As children have different attitudes and behaviors when getting older. From my perspective, i agree with this opinion, educating is one of the most methods to adapt to children's awareness. There are a lot of reasons for student's punishments when they do something wrong. In school, other studying, children could get in touch and hang out with their friends, other people have other communications or other activities so they are affected easily such as violent films or networks. Sometimes, they fall in play so learning is reduced, even they have to face dangers. parents have to have punishments to avoid negative activities from their in life. In contrast to this, children's strain is raised from managing too hard. schools should arrange regulations, open more moral classes to develop interaction teachers between students. In addition, it is the best way if parents usually share stories of life with their children. one in a moon, if children spend on time too much in playing videogames, social internet so good penalties are limited to relax time or increase time doing exercise. Positive punishments could both help a child know their mistakes and interest experiences. For instance, In summer, students can participate volunteer programs, camping series 2 days 1 night, logistics lessons. conclusion, punishments to students are an effective way to them distinguish advantage behaviors and disadvantage behaviors. However, Family and teacher should choose appropriate methods, it is the fundament to develop children's personality
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- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 56
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44166666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.928772496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1634558267 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217374810828 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707220190028 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382863586649 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217374810828 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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