It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is sometimes argued that punishment should be imposed on children so that they differentiate between right or wrong in the early years of their lives. While I accept that punishment can sometime have positive effects on children and therefore should be applied, I believe that parents and teachers should choose proper ways to punish their children.
It it understandable why some people support the opinion that punishment could change the awareness of children. The key rational here is that punishment is vital for children to realize their mistakes and eliminate bad behaviour when they have wrong-doing such as disobeying or telling a lie. Furthermore, parents could give their children warning of light physical punishment ig they are too stubborn. For instance, when i skipped class at primary school, my mother asked me to walk to school rather than take a bus and do chores for a week. This not only helped me realize truancy is improper but also increase my self-discipline.
However reasonable the idea that punishment is necessary to help children is, I am convinced that parents and teachers should choose appropriate ways to teach good behaviour to children. Harsh corporal punishment should not used because the affect negative children's psychology, such as metal disorders and deep depression and pose a threat to their physical health. Instead, parents can opt for educational punishment such as doing housework, setting the limit recreational time, or reducing allowance to avoid money-wasting for useless activities. Teachers, similarly, should not reinforce corporal punishment or humiliation but alternatively require them to write their wrongs to educate them about classroom's discipline or submit more homework.
In conclusion, why it is justifiable that punishment is of significance to educate children on how to distinguish right from wrong, I still believe that punishment are applied should carefully chosen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45514950166 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00607729456 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4643348919 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307438226469 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117626007038 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371296778583 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191371107575 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198865463225 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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