It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
In the globalization era, the demand of high awareness and ethical knowledge of citizens increase. It is asserted that children should be taught about convention, critical thinking and how to recognize right and wrong things. Some people opine that it is necessary to give the sanction to foster children’s conscience. I strongly agree with that option and some suitable punishment could be adopted.
The advance in numerous fields give children a peaceful ad modern life and some consequences can be anticipated Firstly, children are rushing to have the efficiency of the technology and there is amount evidence of computer games which steadily become popular type of entertainment among youngster. Children can easily consider action in virtual game as a norm whether it is right or wrong. For instance, there are a lot of games which comprise violence or crime, thus children imitate these actions and put them in real life, becoming criminals in the future. Secondly, children at the early age tend to rebel during puberty and it is dangerous for parents who do not get along with their offspring or dictate them. Hence, children cannot go back to the right way.
Nonetheless, there are some viable remedies for both parents and teachers and it takes quite a few efforts. The principal punishment is curbing toys and games which include bad content. Moreover, children should be obligated to read book related to specific lesson, with a view to create good habit. For my individual’s example, my parents did not indulge me with luxury things and force me to stay alone until I felt guilty about my rude behavior.
In conclusion, I opine that children should learn how to be a good citizen at a young age and the onus is on parents and teachers to favor them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00673400673 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76553777109 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1275866223 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232260752549 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763443160521 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510585623444 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141075650428 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029545207771 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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