From early childhood, we are so closely bound up with the ability to tell right from wrong. Yet there remains an argument that whether punishment is necessary during the process of distinction, my strong conviction is that it does matter.
Sitting near a naughty and noisy child in a cinema or on the train can be one of many adults’ worst experiences, in which situation parents’ oral criticism seldom works. Similar phenomena like this have been emphasized as there are more only child than any previous period in China, thus essential sanction must be implemented in order to make children aware of their bad behaviors, or young children with no perfect view of good and evil may easily be spoiled .
We cannot deny that punishment can do harm, for inappropriate ones possibly magnify problems only. Consequently, making the sanction fit the crime is useful, which means the punishment should less be of physical ones, since it merely send the message that it is acceptable for stronger people to hit weaker ones-an outcome which may result in the child starting bully others, or just resent the punisher and peers who lead to the punishment.
Therefore, parents and teachers can use a variety of methods depending on the occasions, such as picking up litter thrown by himself, mopping the stained floor or do more cleaning work. If a child beat another one, apology is indispensable, or together with amends like snacks or other small gifts of his own, only then will he realize that every evil deed has its price. In these ways, responsibility comes into being gradually-the exact ultimate goal of punishment, which is both an educational resort and a challenge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: children
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76388078486 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710714285714 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4778021615 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.444444444 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168296415131 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636055041255 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389541655803 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098386434693 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466511145375 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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