Ever since travelling became highly available for everyone, it has been vital to search about the another culture and, moreover, understand all features. Firstly, a traveller or business person is ready for any cases and misunderstanding, thus, cannot get into awkward situation, furthermore, they gain new information about routine life of other people and become more tolerant. On the other hand, miscognizance may lead to various handicaps on journey and negative image of tourists or even the whole nation of a traveller.
By making a pre-research, visitors have more chances to spend pleasurable time by trip. Being culturally aware is a great benefit for tourists since they already know about several fascinating events with regard to traditions. Therefore, they are not afraid of missing such important for natives festivals, for example, Spain visitor may experience the unique one called “Baby-Jumping” or the largest Tomato-fest. Furthermore, businessmen has an opportunity to conduct a market research in order to identify what local people prefer in terms of his venture. Likewise, advantages side of being cognizant is rising tolerance of trippers, which spreads arterwards among the population of the visitor, when they share their experience in the homeland.
Although, the necessity of understanding the culture of a country people visit, not all of travellers tend to explore common features and differences of foreigners, compared with their own culture. Hence, untactful behaviour or embarrassing questions might occur due to ignorance of strange lands. For instance, a visitor may show their lack of knowledge by commenting customs that are unusual for them, which can be considered as an action of disrespect to native culture. With an increasing number of similar occasions, the inhabitants infer a wrong and rough idea about people from a country of this tripper. Not to mention all the alternative costs of businessmen and other chances of one kind that they can lose. Moreover, the journey itself becomes more complicated as other obstacle occur. Especially when a person is confused by actions of natives, they feel probably desolated and this affects the trip itself.
In general, unawareness about the culture of the country a visitor is heading to may cause several issues. Otherwise, travellers explore different places in pleasant atmosphere and take benefits from being cognizant about the life of foreign people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in general, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48947368421 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08490651389 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607894736842 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8036059198 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.705882353 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144794371488 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411867066894 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340039694954 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833316456643 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320540202634 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.