It is increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
This approach has grown in popularity in recent years among students who want to gain a free year by transferring from school to higher education.This essay will highlight the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach.
To begin with the benefits, students require a refreshing break after spending a long time in school.As a result, students have a period of free time for their body and mind without the pressure that they usually feel in school.Twelve years of school education without any breaks some depression problems that help to destroy students' future lives. Besides refreshing their minds, students also have time to find a more exciting field. Students have time to travel around their country and the world, which provides a wealth of information for them to analyze various fields of study.
Taking a gap between transfers from schools to universities, on the other hand, has its own set of drawbacks for some students.If the student has ample free time to enjoy and disconnect from his studies, he might have significant chances of forgetting his basic concepts. Furthermore, when they use that time to enjoy clubs and parties and make new friends, it is possible that the students are involved in drug use. For instance, research conducted by an international organization proves that most students who take a break in between their studies do not attend universities. The majority of young drug users fall into this category.
In conclusion, after a long period of time spent in school, students require a refreshing break to avoid mental illness and gain experience, despite the fact that it has some negative aspects that contribute to their deviance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14855072464 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77929254015 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.321783511 49.4020404114 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.625 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126863340466 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502257909739 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411936883987 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080314108522 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364386852901 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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