: It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: He
...image: none;'>Guy fawkes Night. he converted to Catholicism and fought for...
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Suggestion: He
...t;Philip III was unwilling to help him. he later met Thomas Wintour, returned to e...
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Suggestion: He
...s found fawkes guarding the explosives. he was arrested and died after falling fro...
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Suggestion: Fawkes&apos
...the scaffold where he was to be hanged. fawkes' style='color: rgb11, 0, 128; back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.74729241877 5.12529762239 171% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.7490291049 2.80592935109 490% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 420.332525626 49.4020404114 851% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.222222222 106.682146367 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00418972271965 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00599201224175 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115332802974 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0016722726899 0.151304729494 1% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00289646126302 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.0946893788 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 34.06 12.4159519038 274% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 81.0 9.78957915832 827% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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