It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct. There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Agree or disagree?
That many kinds of animals have been on the verge of extinction is believed as a natural selection, thus, there are no compelling reasons for us to protect them. From my own perspective, I disagree with this short-sighted and irresponsible conviction.
It is undeniable that millions of years ago, many species of animals such as dinosaurs were wiped out due to the climate change in our planet. However, human activities are the predominant contributor to the disappearance of wild animals. Habit loss deriving from industry, housing and agricultural farming causes mass extinction. As a result, it wreaks havoc on the food chain and increases encounters between wild species and people. In such situations, animals can be killed through pesticides, accidents such as collisions with cars, or hunting for commercial purposes.
Moreover, people should have responsibility for protecting animal species due to the obvious fact that animals play a significant role in the balance of the ecosystems and human lives as well. Extracting wildlife from its natural habitat inevitably leads to disastrous results, which can be justified that if a single animal becomes extinct, the whole food chain will be disrupted. For our daily lives, some species of animals play an important role in socio-cultural values which creates traditions and customs in a certain place. For instance, in some religions, cows are revered and worshiped as gods.
The extinction of some animal species is not solely a natural process but primarily man-made causes. Humans are held accountable and should take some effective measures to help preserve wild animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39299610895 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97733264554 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9424977577 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306790621359 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904808829193 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658475213941 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176215694954 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587658217414 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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