It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.
some people believe that famous characters are naturally talented, however, others opine everything can be taught and everybody can be an expert by learning. I think both opinions are correct in some extend, although naturally talented individual should study to become a specialist. In this essay, these two sides will be discussed.
On one side, it is thought a child is born with an exact ability such as music, soccer or be a scientist. it is correct, though the point that should be considered is the role of education. every expert beside their capabilities, educate to expand the knowledge to use the talent in an optimized way. For example, Lionel Messi is a great soccer player who is known as the best of all the time. Obviously, if Barcelona coaches did not explore his capabilities, and he did not learn how being a professional in the future, no one knows him today. Therefore, education for talented children is considerable.
On the other hand, teaching can improve their abilities and illustrating the means to be professional in all fields. Human muscles, no matter physical ones or brain muscles, will be stronger by the exercises. In this case, the rival of Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, is the best example. Ronaldo is known as an athlete who reaches his goals by doing everyday exercises that learned by other experts. Thus, children can become an expert in everything by educating and exercising continuously and not giving up soon.
To summarize, everyone who tries and put his effort on things that love will learn it like an expert. No matter you are talented or not, I believe that the important thing is to do the best and not too hopeless because reaching every aim is so difficult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9587628866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76697394745 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3500411861 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161455808121 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501531384978 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051449014094 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972143745059 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581003976275 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.