Many scientists believe that now we can study the behaviour of a three year old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature? Is it possible to stop children frim growing up to be criminals?
At present, crime by children become an crucial one. A wide number of people who are scientist believe that we can observe the behaviour of children to find the result of their future profession. Actually, crime is not determined by human nature ; they learn it after having different circumstances. I think the crime of children can be prevent if tge necessary steps should taken by the authority or parents.
Children are the copycats; they alwaus try to follow the footsteps of their parents. So, the offspring are easily attracted by their parents. If any one of them are corrupted or offender, the children will learn it and become a criminal in future. Nowadays, surrounding people plays a vital role to misguide the chidren. For example, the teenager who are growing ina slum will easily involve themselves in numerous crimes because most of the offender comes from lower class people.
It also seen that bad company of friends are one of the most silent reason children for becoming criminal. Though the parents are busy with their lifestyle or such as jobs, they do not have enough time to take care of their child.
Crimes rate of children can be shrink if we follow some rules and regulation. First of all, proper manner should be taught by their parents. Parents also may help them by judging when they are making friends or making any important decision.
In educational institution the mentor will teach them proper education and even how to avoid crimes. In their curriculum some morality based books should be involve by the government. Religious purposes also play an important role for remaining far from crime. If the authority unable to take some necessary step, they wilk suffer a lot.
In conclusion, children are the future leaders of a country. By any means they should not be misguided. In order to make themselves honest both parents and government should work with altogether.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96884735202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56324838332 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557632398754 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9944869261 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.9523809524 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21117955342 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601936248422 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496451062822 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107577242023 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634723752833 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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