The leader or director of organization are often older people but some people say that younger people can also be a leader do you agree or disagree
In the present era, the people age doesn't matter because they have lots of knowledge due to internet service. Indeed, the leader or directors of the organization are most probably older peoples. But, few people feel younger citizens can also be a leader. This essay will explain the aged people are more suitable for director post and the reasons are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To starts with, there are plenty of things, which indicated the older peoples are reasonable for the director duty. First and foremost, the main factor which is much need for direction is experience. That comes from passing the time in a particular field. That will help to make the task convenient for others. For example, the most successful companies in the world such as the TATA group. That companies director are senior citizens. The skill of a director comes from experience.
Furthermore, the leaders need to be a take decision with accuracy. That quality only has in older people because they have seen enough situation in their life so they can control the unfamiliar situation very easily. The leader of any country is older people. For example, in India, the main position of countries is Prime Minister, there are more than 10 Prime Minister came and goes they all are senior citizens.
To conclude, the older people have much more experience and decision-making abilities therefore, they are the best candidate for the leader and director Who makes work smooth and rapid. Overall, the aged people are more valuable for the director post rather than the young generation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
In the present era, the people age doesnt matter because they have lots of knowle...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'ministers'?
Suggestion: Ministers
... Minister, there are more than 10 Prime Minister came and goes they all are senior citiz...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Minister' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ministers'.
Suggestion: Ministers
... Minister, there are more than 10 Prime Minister came and goes they all are senior citiz...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02671755725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54351156493 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1260261136 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4705882353 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311535811198 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103763751297 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100192760039 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205584353422 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104444199358 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
In the present era, the people age doesnt matter because they have lots of knowle...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'ministers'?
Suggestion: Ministers
... Minister, there are more than 10 Prime Minister came and goes they all are senior citiz...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Minister' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ministers'.
Suggestion: Ministers
... Minister, there are more than 10 Prime Minister came and goes they all are senior citiz...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02671755725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54351156493 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1260261136 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4705882353 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311535811198 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103763751297 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100192760039 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205584353422 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104444199358 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.