The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people feel that young-age group can perform better leadership passion, while most of presidents in companies are typically senior. Personally, I opine the same perspective for reasonable point which I will elaborate in the following paragraph.
First of all, it is obvious that junior has wider flexibility and motivation to learn to manage organizations in the fast-paced world. Indeed Career Guide shows that most of young generation make an investment to enhance their technological ability and interpersonal skills transforming to impactful business. Furthermore, elderly person is hardly to engage with the circumstances or even sharing jokes due to age gap. Proven by Frontiers in Physiology states the more mature a person becomes, the more structured and dominant their thoughts become, so that everything must be addressed in a serious way.
Conversely, this conveys some positives that those who be a leader in mature age has been validated having validated educational background and an abundance experience related to their occupations rather than the young one It is evident that multinational companies, iPhone, are leaded by the oldest. Moreover, younger people tend to less of mature thinking, in which this organizations find to meet the needs. Moreover, high levels of emotionality at a young age make it difficult to make decisions at critical times. the feeling of individualism and envy between others makes the work atmosphere uncomfortable.
To sum up, it seems to me that placing elderly people as a leader is worth implementing including greater senior learning experiences and emotional control. This is as long as the can afford the world dynamic situation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the presidents') or simply say ''most presidents''.
Suggestion: most of the presidents; most presidents
...erform better leadership passion, while most of presidents in companies are typically senior. Pers...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... organizations in the fast-paced world. Indeed Career Guide shows that most of young g...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a serious way" with adverb for "serious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e, so that everything must be addressed in a serious way. Conversely, this conveys some posit...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in mature age has been validated having validated educational background and an ...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd to less of mature thinking, in which this organizations find to meet the needs. M...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s organizations find to meet the needs. Moreover, high levels of emotionality at a young...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...lt to make decisions at critical times. the feeling of individualism and envy betw...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to make decisions at critical times. the feeling of individualism and envy betwee...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people as a leader is worth implementing including greater senior learning experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.463878327 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11136295702 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657794676806 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8082453592 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175886192858 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544901372924 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534800695917 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950779906288 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036751871431 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the presidents') or simply say ''most presidents''.
Suggestion: most of the presidents; most presidents
...erform better leadership passion, while most of presidents in companies are typically senior. Pers...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... organizations in the fast-paced world. Indeed Career Guide shows that most of young g...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a serious way" with adverb for "serious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e, so that everything must be addressed in a serious way. Conversely, this conveys some posit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in mature age has been validated having validated educational background and an ...
^^
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd to less of mature thinking, in which this organizations find to meet the needs. M...
^^^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s organizations find to meet the needs. Moreover, high levels of emotionality at a young...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...lt to make decisions at critical times. the feeling of individualism and envy betw...
^^^
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to make decisions at critical times. the feeling of individualism and envy betwee...
^^
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people as a leader is worth implementing including greater senior learning experi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.463878327 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11136295702 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657794676806 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8082453592 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175886192858 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544901372924 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534800695917 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950779906288 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036751871431 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.