The level of youth crime increasingly rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons and solutions?
Along with the modernization , there is an increasing number of young offenders and this issue is becoming a grave problem that need to be solved. There are various causes that lead to this pressing problem, measures can be taken by both individuals and authorities to mitigate this alarming issue.
Some factors are attributed to the increasing youth crime rates in the society.On reason is that children always feel lack of loving and caring from their parents at their formative years, which isolates them from their own family. Due to the globalization of commerce, most parents have to work at distant locations and can not allocate their time to taking care their child. Consequently, the isolation of a kid will increase so they are more prone to suffer from mental disorder, which will change their pattern of behavior, code of conduct in the negative way.
Secondly, the advent of different electric devices such as computers and smart phones are the precursor of criminal activities of the youngsters. The indulgence in violent games now can be easily seen among teenagers. Most of them prefer playing video game filled up with gory senses to taking up any extra_ curriculum activities with friends or family. If a person is exposed into a violent environment everyday, they will take those corporal activities into granted and engage in those activities without knowing its potential risks.
Both individuals and authorities should take step to tackle this urgent problems. The first solution is that school and authorities should promote crime invention programs that help to raise awareness of crime invention and show students the full weight of law when they commit a crime. On being well equipped with useful information about crimes and its negative effects on life, youngster won't have tend to turn into life of crime.In regard to individuals, most of parents should allocate more time on taking care their child instead of indulging in work. This will promote interaction between family members and create bonds of love and care, which is vital for shaping a child's value in the long run. furthermore, parents and school should try their best to control and monitor their child' s viewing which will act as a detergent that prevent teenagers from being exposed to violent environment.
To sump up, the causes of this problem are various and both state and individual should take action to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11779448622 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58967179388 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6918358537 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.133333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952784508343 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288939204013 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392712874541 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428815500876 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375558381355 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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