Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
An increasing concern for many people around the world is that the crime rates of youngsters are growing excessively. This essay will examine why this is happening and provide solutions to overcome this negative trend.
From an overall perspective, there two main reasons why the crime rates in teenagers are experiencing a rapid increase. The primary cause of this is that the negative effects of video games and social media platforms. People, especially teenagers, are spending too much time on playing video games and surfing on these platforms, such as Instagram and Facebook. They are playing video games, which contain extremely violent contents, such as robbery, gun attack, and drug selling. They find these contents attractive and as a part of life and they cannot be aware of these actions are not legal. Secondly, nowadays, parents, both fathers and mothers, are working and they cannot spend time with their children. Today, children have ‘virtual friends’ on social media and, sometimes, these friends become their role model figure, so they are affected by these friends. For example, if these virtual friends use drugs when they are streaming live on social media, children may find this behaviour attractive and adopt this as a good and normal behaviour.
However, there are a variety of solutions at hand to address this problem. The first solution to this problem might be that governments control over the social media and violent games. If there is a legal problem or excessive violent factors on these platforms and video games, governments should take actions to restrict them. Secondly, parents should give more time to teach the morality to their children. Today’s world, It is undeniable that both parents need to work to proceed their families’ life and to provide opportunities to their children. Whereas, they are also responsible for nourishing their children and they should observe the children’s behaviours.
In conclusion, it must be said that increase of youth crime levels has become a complex issue with no easy solutions. However, there some measures to tackle this issue and the biggest onus is on the families. The steps must be taken on a war footing to protect our children and society by the governments and families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28532608696 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72055115196 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1705396919 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.368421053 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16157141098 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512710328153 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637691841864 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122288325129 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724111027052 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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