Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
An increasing concern for many people around the world is that the younger generation more tends to commit a crime compared to the past. While there are many factors which lead to this, there are various ways to overcome this problem. In this essay, I will outline the reasons why the dire state of affairs is occurring and explore some potential solutions to this topic.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why this issue is rather common among teenagers. It is a well-known fact that one who needs parental cares is neglected by one's parents during her/his childhood. This is due to parents responsible for him or her has a various task that they have to do, such as to work hard, to gain money and to struggle their own personal problems. The result of lack of parent's interest which is the crucial role of a child's life is that their links with family are damaged, which in turn leads to a propensity for violence.
Secondly the increasing level of poverty around the world. Moreover, the rich get richer, the poor get poorer. Unless the balance income fix, it is sure to adolescents resort illegal way to get what others have. Therefore the problem caused by fewer earnings should not be underestimated.
However, there are a variety of viable solutions at hand to address this problem. Firstly, by supporting families as material and spiritual when they demand, we could make it less likely that youths will commit crimes when they live in prosperity. In addition, it is unreasonable to suggest that teenagers should not be punished to deter them from crime although the problem relates outside factors. For this reason, parents also have to take more responsibilities for actions caused by their children. They might be punished if their children commit a crime.
In conclusion, youth crime is an issue which will continue our attention for the foreseeable future. If the authorities choose to ignore this issue, the future of our society and people will be in more danger
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90058479532 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58094398318 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.796931419 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262111376425 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765188031042 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690894358589 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134214423257 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575199192985 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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