Life expectancy is increasing. What are the reasons of this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Increasing health facilities and consuming healthy diet are main factor increasing of life expectancy. This makes the people still productive in the old ages.
Consuming healthy diet and improving health facilities can increase life expectancy because of these are the steps to maintain health. Contains of healthy food is rich with vitamin and antioxidant which can make the function of body become stronger, and the facilities of health will support the people to know the ways of preventing some viral diseases. Since 2005 to 2008, malaria diseases had killed 200.000 people in Papua, this condition had made the health ministry of Indonesia planned to build health center in each districts villages in 2009. Based on this case, the doctors of such ministry had did the experiment related to this disease, and the results was the people had to consume green pare and banana to prevent development of malaria disease, so the number of malaria disease in Papua has declined around 60% in 2015. What is consequence of this issue? The health programs have decreased the number of viral disease in Indonesia, and these has increased rate of life expectancy.
The positive of increasing life expectancy is the majority people have long life to do more productive activity. This condition causes over population which can increase the rate of unemployed. Although unemployed rate increase, the people can be turned to other sector to improve number of production. Evidently, the government of Japan has made the rule in 2000 that the majority of elderly, above 50 ages, had to work in agriculture and environmental sector to improve agriculture production like rice, vegetable and fruit, and help to clean the public areas. These actions gave the big impact to Japan, in 2010, this country received the prestige as the cleanest country in the world, and at the time, Japan was the largest rice producing country in East Asia, defeated other huge country such as South Korea and North Korea. If the other countries imitate this strategy, then reducing gap between developed and under developed countries.
On the whole, increasing of life expectancy is caused by consuming healthy diets and improving health facilities. This situation gives the positive impact like inclining the number production in various sectors. Hopefully, the rate of life expectancy continues to rise, and this gives positive effect to life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22107969152 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63744193234 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514138817481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9679742045 49.4020404114 148% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.109620156353 0.084324248473 130% => OK
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Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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