Life was better when technology was simpler.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It is argued that life was more fulfilling when technology was less complex. This essay completely disagrees with that statement and believes that developed technology has made life much better because it is time-saving and make it easier to communicate with one another.
Development of technology aid people to save enormous time. That is to say that new improvements in electronic devices have helped them to get more rapid therefore individuals do not need to waste as much as a time like in the past times. Engineers and scientists have been developing phones and computers every day and have been making it more practical for users with every new development. For example, smartphones such as iPhone and Android have been getting faster with every new update, whereas old non-smartphones lowering their speed with time as it never updates it selves.
Technological improvements also have made it effortless to communicate with others. While it takes days to able to reach someone via letters in the past, with using the mobiles people text anyone they want in just seconds now. This result in having better personal relationships with family and friends as communication is less laborious now. For instance, students who are studying and living abroad away from their parents can easily reach their family via Skype and keep their family bonds tight even though they cannot physically see each other for a long period of time.
In conclusion, this essay argues that high technology leads people to waste less time and reach their loved ones easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 561, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ot physically see each other for a long period of time. In conclusion, this essay argues t...
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Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time and reach their loved ones easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14901960784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68335607891 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.508795013 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.363636364 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119938720008 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613420117703 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992867707324 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960463951657 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11793137116 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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