The line chart details the proportion of residents living in Australia in millions from different regions between 1976 and 2011.
The line graph gives information about how many residents from various regions lived in Australia during the period from 1976 to 2011.
Overall, the total number of immigrants in Australia increased dramatically until the end of the period after seeing a continual decrease. It is also clear that there was an upward trend in the number of UK residents, whereas Asia and other areas showed a reverse pattern.
In 1976, the population of British people stood at around 14 million as opposed to about 6 million of Asian ones, after which the former experienced a continuous fall to merely 5 million people in 2011 while the latter saw an opposite change, growing to hit its highest point of 15 million people.
In comparison, starting at roughly 11 million people migrating from other regions of the world, the figure for this group dropped by nearly 3 million in 1986, but then went up noticeably to just under 15 million in the next 20 years before ending at approximately 13 million people at the end of the period. In general, the total population of immigrants in Australia declined constantly from 23 million to 19 million in the first two decades, followed by a dramatic rise to peak at 25 million fifteen years later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...illion people at the end of the period. In general, the total population of immigr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86255924171 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60822872438 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7724325314 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266873688886 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133825198355 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120043391642 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172935212358 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127891405324 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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