Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is generally believed that language barrier is the biggest obstacle for people who live aboard, because it may cause some major communal issue also practical challenges. I strongly dissent from this statement. Technology and internet are developing significantly, so it will be easier for people to learn foreign language, and people are provided a great condition by living aboard.

Nowadays, many country have better technology for communication also education; as the result, learning a new foreign is really accessible. Lots of language learning program are created, and most of them are free and suitable for many people, and some of program are bilingual; thus, people who going to study a new language will receive help by these programs. In addition, on the internet, there are many online languages courses, so people are able to stay at home and join the class,and most these course are expensive, but there are also some of them are organized for free, accordingly it will be useful for living aboard students who do not have enough money to pay for a course.

Furthermore, living overseas is the best method to learn foreign languages. People who live in a different country will have a better opportunity to meet new foreigner; hence, they can make a lot of friends. Consequently, they will have more knowledge about their culture and easily learn the language.

In conclusion, with the mass improvement of science and technology, and with the benefits of living overseas then social and practical problems will not be a big issue for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to program'
Suggestion: to program
...y accessible. Lots of language learning program are created, and most of them are free ...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... able to stay at home and join the class,and most these course are expensive, but th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09338521401 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7626185125 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.40968525 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16837327222 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07609519104 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382669789837 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115101657771 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324041228425 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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