Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A student who want to study aboard, a man or woman who desire to marry a foreigner, might both face a problem regarding to language. While conversation plays an essential role in daily life, living in a country without knowing its language could lead to many serious troubles.
First of all, the lack of ability to communicate with the local residents makes it's difficult to serve daily need for food, accommodation, career, and so on. For example, you go into the supermarket and look for a certain type of vegetable but you do not know how to spell its name or how to ask for help. Moreover, sometimes, life brings us surprises, it could be good, and also be danger like crimes, disaster. If you do not know the local language, how can you notice the potential risk on time?
Secondly, not knowing the local language also means it's difficult to make new friends. Therfore, not only you will feel lonely, but also you could feel isolated. It could lead to serious mental illness.
Nevertheless, the development of technological devices could support people with some translating apps. Besides, you could get help from friends or family who come from the same country. However, these method can not cover all the situations that could happen.
In conclusion, going abroad could bring an opportunity to a better life but it also includes potential risks. So, preparing carefully, at least knowing the local language is a necessary requirement.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90612244898 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72035228137 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9668993345 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173218771493 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569368182872 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443935120916 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875287732283 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034571268588 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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