Living in a Country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent, do you agree?
Dwelling in a foreign country brings about not only community Problems but also practical sufferings, if one living abroad doesn't command over the foreign language. But the issues can be middled out with proper preparation by the help of technology from the very beginning of planning stage to go & settle abroad. Therefore, in my Opinion, the notion of the statement doesn't agree to a wide extent.
Firstly, if one is aspiring to settle in a foreign country, he/she already knows the barriers that wil be faced initially after stepping into there. Hence, regional language comes first as an obstacle. But living in a globalized & technology dependent era, this sort of problem should not be treated as a major one. For example, If you want to go Germany, all the materials to learn that particulati language, you have bunch of online coures on internet. While applying to visa or work permit procedures, you will have plenty of time to prepare yourself. So, reserving the time for mastering the necessary vocabulary can certainly save your back.
Secondly, the advantages of studying foreign language are mashmooming with the accelerated globalized world, as bilingulism in considered one of the most powerful real life skills to ever exist, rather than just being nifty-party trick. Whereas the root concern in about social & real life problems, it will steadily be abated after just taking the preparation phase seriously. The ability of knowing local language / mother tongue will at the same time boost his/her resume to a highly competitive level . Also, this language skilled abroad life will provide him tremendously better and authentic experiences. Being a social being, building friendship & sharing emotion with their tone can be easy as well. Knowing a diverse & rich culture of overseas gradually will advance him/her psychologically. Graining new perspective will strongly smash those initial stage hassles and present a soothing life ahead.
To conclude, It's no secret that foreign tongue can improve one's job prospects, & deepen the connection to living community. Enabling oneself to contact through local language, can remarkably make him/her a much more valuable employee & having that edge in the pocket makes the lite enjoyable. So, grasping over the language can lesesen the introductory social & empirical difficulties hand in hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36756756757 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79642133792 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1997512571 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.526315789 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225934454886 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585915817572 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461731839174 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132149529387 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440132244205 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.