For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
Art is a way through which one can express his feelings and thoughts. In the past times, people thought art was a great part of their heritage; constrastingly, this is not the case in this modern world, everybody gave more weightage to business, science and technology, as compare to arts. The reasons behind this scenario will be discussed in this essay and some solution will be suggest by me in the end.
To start with, the reasons of this situation, first and foremost, required of individuals has changed. To elaborate, in this modern world, everybody wants to live a comfortable life. This can not be done by traditional art; furthermore, it is only possible by investing in new technology and science field. Moreover, people nowadays, wants to earn more and more money that is why there focus is now shifted to business. Art is very essential and important; despite this, people chosse others aspects than art. Thus, it is vivid that thinking of the people have changed which effect the focus of masses towards the art.
However, art is also important for everybody. It connects every individuals to there roots. In addition, we can not neglect it's importance. So, to revive the art, authority can take some steps. Firstly, they can invest more in artistic fields and can allow people to viste museums and art gallerys free of cost, through it masses can able to know about there culture and heritage. Adding on to it government should encourage children to study subjects like art and music by doing so they can able to reverse this situation. Hence government can deal with this problem by taking some steps.
In conclusion, although, there is a hug important of business,science and technology, ancient culture and artwork should not be lost; therefore, federations can tackle with this situation by taking some crucial steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97411003236 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70843432819 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8671878676 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4117647059 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250610089376 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841905818704 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601034559524 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148260626885 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724416933736 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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