A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
In many parts of the world tourism is considered as a primary source of income. For some regions as the middle eastern countries and the north Asian countries, this essay will discuss the pros of tourism as the main source of income and the cons of tourism if it’s not well managed.
For some countries tourism is an important ark of income. It open opportunities for locals to work in the tourism field . Also, it provides the country with other currencies as the us dollar that can help in the process of importation. As an example, Egypt had the biggest tourism income among all of the middle east countries in 2007 and that caused a high rate of salaries for the employees that work in tourism in that year. And that resulted in a big income to the Egyptian banks as the employees put their money to invest with the banks.
On the other hand, Tourism can be a source of problems if one of the tourists had a problem in your country. It’s your responsibility as a country to take care of your tourist’s life. also, that can cause a big problem between two countries.as an example, in the last year there was a group of tourists who was visiting a temple in India and they got kidnapped and the tourists embassy got involved to solve the problem. And that resulted in putting India in the blacklist to this country.
In conclusion, Tourism is a double-edged weapon it has many benefits and in some occasions in can be a big disaster. In my opinion the advantages of tourism outweigh its disadvantages but you should also be prepared for the worst scenarios.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56028368794 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63477740373 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496453900709 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8889141759 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347587175602 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122400117296 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909821577798 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219102970056 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762669907278 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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