On the contemporary times, it cannot be denied that metropolises are being noticably growth, which brings a wide range of issues to the youth. Although there will undoubtly be some negative consequences, some remedies should be taken into consideration to mitigate these problems.
To begin with, this phenomenon leads to a variety of detrimental consequences. First and foremost, there are a lot of circumstances that the exploitation of scarce wood is excessive, leading to forest degradation and collapse. In addition, no more trees also means floods will sweep everywhere and animals lose their habitats. Secondly, dense population easily causes traffic congestion, leading to the poor air quality in sprawling cities. Along with a low quality of air, citizens have a tendency to sufer from lung-related diseases, which affect detrimentally and seriously on the latter health of urban inhabitants.
In order to sort out this phenomenon, several effective remedies shoule be taken into consideration by governments as well as individuals. Firstly, the authorities had better enact a variety of strict laws. For instance, for those who tend to harness forest illegally must be witnessed some appropriate penalties and have to pay fines. Secondly, each citizens have a responsibility to contribute to minimize the consequences, caused by those problems. For example, instead of using their private cars, inhabitants should utilize public transportations, such as buses or undergrounds. Therefore, the air conditioning will be improved and the whole health of citizens will be better.
To conclude, the swift growth of many sprawling cities will cause many negative issues, that can affect directly and badly biodiversity and human beings. Thus, those aforementioned solutions should be implemented to mitigate this considerable issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66064981949 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22189980455 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0796607041 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0464139323066 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0152467642049 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152801619408 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0301930201004 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157853121722 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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