The majority of news is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crimes. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?
It is argued that people are overwhelmed by bad news. While I find some possible reasons leading to the crisis of that news, I strongly agree that residents should learn how to create a balance when getting news.
There is no denying that there are various reasons why bad news is prevalent nowadays, one of which is a sense of curiosity. According to a psychological experiment in the United States, each individual is more likely to choose what they prefer, regardless of its advantages or drawbacks. Hence, some inhabitants complain about hearing bad news too much because they tend to ignore other kinds of news and only get bad news, such as violence or poverty. In addition, when innocent citizens get a piece of bad news, media producers are able to track their tastes and announce more of that news, resulting in thrilling news regularly.
I personally believe that members of the community should maintain a balance of both good and bad news. It is said that people cannot change their situation or environment, except for their attitude. Moreover, news, whether it is good or bad, plays a role as a means of recreation or knowledge. In other words, the news serves human needs, and people have the right to choose neutrally. If they could keep them under control, they could have opportunities to develop sympathies towards those who are less fortunate when getting bad news or express motivating feelings when getting good news, which makes them become more humane and have a clear aim in life.
In conclusion, despite a range of reasons for overloading bad news in society, I realize that each person can remain balanced when getting both good and bad news and keeping their feelings neutral.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, while, except for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9446366782 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59176710717 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3728061793 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408946864066 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186211219264 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102570554644 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290296773405 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243498692771 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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