Many argue that everyone should take parenting training course while others disagree with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Parenting training course consists of various courses about how you can take good care of your children, right from their childhood to adulthood. It gives tips to parents about how they can take precautionary measures for the well-being of new born babies and detailed explanation of these measures. But not every parent can afford money to undertake this training. So, I partially agree with the given statement and the reasons will be stated below.
Firstly, it is responsibility of the parent to look after their child during his/her initial stages. He need to take utmost care of his child regarding the food he has to take, clothes he has to wear and other precautionary measures because as a new born he is less resistant to surrounding’s and can be easily prone to diseases. So, this can be taught to parents either by their elders (like their parents) or by their neighbours who has already had a baby. So, it all depends on the individual to join parenting training course or not.
However, in the case of parents who have no guidance from anyone and do not know how to handle a new born these classes are really helpful to them as they teach all the measures to be taken until their child get’s adapted to the environment. They guide you about diet to be followed, vaccines that are to be given to their children during initial stages of their growth and at what interval they have to be given.
Attending this training will always be helpful and there is no disadvantage in attending this course but few of them cannot afford to pay the money that is required to attend the course because of their economical-status and lot many reasons(like personal feeling that course won’t be much helpful,etc) in such a cases they prefer to get guidance from their friends and family. So, we cannot say that it is compulsory for parents to take this training because it all depends upon individual opinion and their willingness to take this course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
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Suggestion: , etc
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a case' or simply 'cases'?
Suggestion: a case; cases
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their willingness to take this course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, really, regarding, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77647058824 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71880545722 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7316144851 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157723135498 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697549321318 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039194978599 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104674888047 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379381319759 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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