The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world space. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.
The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a well-known fact that from our ancient history to present modernization the nation with the greatest power is the one which has greatest military strength, the strength in army depends upon the number of deadly weapons it possesses. One such weapon is the nuclear weapon, the nation with the highest number of nuclear weapons is the strongest one, so nuclear power plays a vital role during the period of war, but it's after effects are worse.
Nuclear technology plays an important role in the cases where the outbreak of war is prevalent, the nation which has less number of nukes or lack in nuclear technology ultimately steps back from war for the fear of devastation caused by the nuclear outbreak. The other nations which have the support of the nation, that is a pioneer in nuclear technology is also thereby in safe hands as any problem to these nations creates disturbance indirectly to the highest powered nation. So to some extent, the maintenance of world peace depends upon the fear for the nuclear outbreak. One of the examples is the contemporary agitation that is going on near the border of India, Pakistan, and China.Pakistan and China have a plan of attacking India but are stepping back as India is getting support from few of the leading nations like Indonesia, America etc.
However despite these advantages the nuclear outbreak results in vast devastation in the country where it has occurred, it's after effects are uncontrollable and worse, one of the examples is the nuclear explosion that is caused in Hiroshima and Nagasaki by the Americans, it has resulted in death of millions of people and after the explosion the gases that are released turns atmosphere poisonous. Breathing this air many people can suffer from various lung disorders and they result in many fatal diseases. And also the nation on which nuclear attack occurred goes 100 years back in development, the nation's government should spend a lot of money to recover from this attacks thereby spending the money that is to be allocated to various development projects, and sometimes result in the drop of nation's GDP.
So, in my point of view the nuclear technology is more harmful and deadly and should not be used unless and until the situation between the nations is out of control and one positive sign of this technology is that it can kill millions of people at a time which is very useful in the times of war.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83574879227 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60191909241 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48309178744 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0646812725 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.2 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194902013269 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907684974371 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744355312874 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125073552826 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457809549173 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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