In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Due to globalization and development in technology many people are moving from rural areas to cities or towns in search of jobs, this has led to the increase in population in the cities.People in search for cheap and best source of living are preferring to live in apartments as they are available at cheaper rates than the individual houses. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of living in apartments far outweigh the advantages of living in the individual house and the reasons are stated in following paragraphs.
Firstly, security is the major concern for the people living anywhere. So, in this aspect apartments far outweigh the individual homes because apartment consists of more families living in it. This enables them to watch each other's houses if a particular family is away from home. Unlike apartments, individual houses fail to provide this security as there is only one family living in the house and it is vulnerable to theft or robbery when it is away.
Apart from security, apartments also provide high-class facilities with less cost. For example, if we need to live in the individual house we need to purchase land and then plan to construct our home, for which we need to spend huge money as the cost of the land in and around cities will be very high. This is not the case with the apartments as we can spend the money that we used to buy the land in designing the interior of our homes.
However, there are meager disadvantages due to apartments. One of the disadvantage is lack of privacy in the apartments and the other fire accident. If there is a sudden outbreak of fire in apartments, we cannot escape easily from building especially people living in upper floor's however, the possibility for fire accident is very rare.
In the conclusion, I would like to say that the advantages of living in apartments far outweigh its disadvantages and provide cheaper cost of living with all the desirable facilities. It also enables you to make friends with other people living in apartments thereby extending your circle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, apart from, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82670454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77748375323 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3557518299 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251774335986 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957858311641 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491140550652 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147120560254 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545480114505 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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