Nowadays, all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is quite debatable topic about sanctioning public parks and sports facilities instead of encouraging shopping complexes when any new towns are planned. However, in my perspective the former is more beneficial than the later and the reasons are listed in the below paragraphs.
Firstly, shopping centers are not preferred by all the categories of people for spending their free time. There may be people who cannot afford to spend money for shopping each and every time they visit these centers in their free time, moreover the rates on items on these shopping complexes or multiplexes are very high when compared to outside these shops. So, not all people encourage them, especially middle class people. So, these shops are to be constructed keeping in view of people living in that town.
On the other hand public parks and sports facilities can be utilized by all categories of people, irrespective of their economic status. Also parks help people living in same town to get to know each other there by extending their circle of friends and also retired people can spend their free time mostly in parks, especially playing some indoor games like caroms, chess, etc with other people in the locality. Playing sports help children and teenagers to stay fit and healthy, also it teaches them team management and how to mingle with people of different culture living in that town, thereby teaching them mutual respect.
On the whole, I would like to conclude that it is always better to encourage public parks and providing the newly proposed town with sport facilities rather than constructing multiplexes and shopping complexes as the former can be utilized by all people(rich, poor and middle class), unlike the later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06315789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48205873702 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9516307621 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152829423255 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714653786094 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466130996282 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103694456318 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198032762048 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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