For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some think that computer skills be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?
In this developing world, advancement in technology has changed our life significantly. Using computers is one of the basic skills required for every individual. While reading, writing and mathematics have been the most integral parts of education over centuries, some people believe that developing computer skills should be included in the curriculum.
There are various reasons why education systems should emphasize on considering computers in syllabus. It cannot be denied that world is going digital now a days. Many people suggest that, introducing computer in a very young age will help develop the digital skills required in future.
The main aim of the academic education is to develop essential life skills like reading, writing, numerical calculations which are imperative in all life situations. Likewise, digital literacy is also considered to be very important. It is beneficial in many ways, Firstly it would help children in future with university education. For instance, while pursuing academic education students are required to give powerpoint presentation and slides for their projects. Therefore, early introduction to computer education will make things much more easier for them.
In addition, in this technosavvy world a good command on computer is the pre-requisite for most of the job requirements. For example, people often need to use computers at workplace to keep records, send emails and build customer relationships. Thus, ability to use computers helps individuals with job prospects and even increases choices of employability.
In conclusion, in my opinion, in order to enable children to walk hand in hand with the digital world, the educational authorities should consider adding computer to the curriculum.
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65660377358 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0595746103 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2347137211 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247112399728 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778669058689 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627894468252 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136537394638 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674286488414 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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