Many companies sponsor sports to advertise their products or service. What advantages and disadvantages does this bring for the teams and individuals that these companies sponsor?
Promoting products or services through sponsoring sports is widely used by many companies. There are several merits and demerits from this issue which I will elaborate in the following paragraph.
Considering the benefits, sport advertising has the potential to assist financial support to meet the team’s needs. Along with joining prestigious tournaments, providing experienced coach and subsidising equipment afford talent development to obtain better quality outcome. Fly Emirates sponsorship elevates Real Madrid performance to the top of European football. Furthermore, this also gives each individual the opportunity to expand their career prospects, for instance becoming a celebrity. It is showed by Cristiano Ronaldo generating enormous income through CocaCola ambassador. Regarding that, fans attraction may bolster athlete become more well-known and trustworthy to engage various profitable activities.
In contrast, we should emphasize some drawbacks of this issue that the sport club commercialism does not guarantee positive feedbacks, contractual agreements can restrict the flexibility of team's management decisions. Discrepancies in each other ambitions contributes to the corporate regulation that are sometimes in conflict with the team’s value as happened to Manchester city obliged to pay premiere league penalty. Moreover, the differences treatment among members might engender social jealousy. Considering that, the sponsor tendency appoint athletes with proportional capabilities or physique traits to display projects constraints people's future opportunities.
In summary, the positives of endorsing sport may uplift clubs revenue and boast individual to have greater job opportunity. However, the negatives of this promotion are the limited access in various events and social gaps among members due to corporate preference in profiling suitable product or service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2433460076 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06564343985 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.749049429658 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8392819925 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198142405807 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558409727561 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663689606765 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112687586213 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443396031544 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.91 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.09 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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