Many companies sponsor sports as a way for advertising themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this age and day where sports have become an essential feature for human physical health and entertainment. As it goes viral every day, businesses provide support for sports as a way of advertising themselves. While many people believe that it is good for sports, others argue that the drawbacks are those that should also be concerned. This essay will carefully analyze two sides of the opinion.
On the one hand, companies' investment does bring a lot of benefits to sports. The first point worth noting is that money from sponsors helps provide the competitors with better training conditions, for example, footballers get a larger ground or modern equipment serve their practice. Therefore, the investment of companies can save the finance of a sports clubs, the covid19 pandemic, for instance, affects the sports world badly, which the providing of companies are needed to maintain those teams career.
On the other hand, some disadvantages should be considered. Those companies advertising themselves through sports are not always reliable, some of them sell unsafe products which leads bad effects on the consumers. Moreover, most businesses chose famous teams to sponsor while those smaller teams are not always lucky to receive the investment.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks, I believe the benefit still overweight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this age and day where sports have b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39150943396 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74310602265 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669811320755 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0252640471 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350838795481 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111730986556 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594117486765 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169444179123 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100006149656 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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