Many companies sponsor sports as a way for advertising themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Many people adopt a view that advertisement is the key factor that leads to a successful sports match. However, others fiercely oppose that it ruins the quality and initial purpose in terms of sports matches. Personally speaking, I am of the opinion that merits and dismerits of this debate are in equal measures for some particular rationales below.
On the bright side, sports commercial brings about many outstanding benefits which enables audiences to have the best experience. Free football or tennis matches on TV or on any social platforms are broadcast for everyone thanks to a huge budget sponsored by advertising companies. By the same token, sports organization can afford a larger pitch or court that allows a remarkable number of spectators to take part in. What is more, sports players are also equipped with more advanced facilities, thereby reducing the chances of injuries and boosting their spirits to the peak. To cite a good example of avertising sponsorship, VAR- a piece of modern technology sponsored by commercial companies which is currently introduced to be a reliable assistance in every football match, has proved its incredible effectiveness in increasing the fairness of all the scores.
On the dark side, it is inevitable that this kind of advertisements induce a host of considerable problems to both sports fan and players themselves. To be more specific, a sudden advertisement during a match will not only interrupt the rhythm of the tie but also diverge attention of the players, which can result in losing concentration and in the worst-case scenario, a loss of the whole team. In addition, enormous banners and irritating brochures also disturb the spectators’experience. Therefore, the pure purpose of sports is overshadowed by a commercial one. In a current case of Heineiken in EURO 2020 happening a few months ago, although their beverage is absolutely not good for health, especially for sports atheletes, it appeared in almost every corner of the stadium which sadly annoyed Paul Pogba and as a result, he had to remove it because of its bad effects for both people’s health and the competition as well.
To conclude, with some pronounced reasons represented, I believe that even though sports advertisements are necessary, sports organizers should take effects of each product into consideration before deciding to let it appear in an official event.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, kind of, as a result, what is more, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23056994819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14420372659 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613989637306 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7081223943 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.214285714 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289632002122 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883190506152 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507846242325 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16952419939 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456274007124 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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