Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The speedy development of modern technology has partly digitalized shopping and leave a heated controversy about whether shopping nowadays has become more simple thanks to it. While machinery and the Internet have some certain drawback, I believe that shopping experiences have seen a positive revolution.
On the one hand, shopping online cannot guarantee the best product quality for customers. Shopping online means that users usually do not visit the store and check the quality, the color, the materials of the product directly before making purchase decision. Countless humorous stories about the differences between advertised pictures and the real deliverables when purchasing clothes online have proven this fact. Besides, the majority of elderly see no benefits of shopping online as are not quick on the uptake with technology.
On the other hand, shopping online are undeniably convenient and time-saving. With a smartphone, people can purchase anything without having to go outside under the scorching heat or downpour just to get some groceries. This actually comes in handy for parents of a newborn who find it hard to go to physical stores, as they would like to keep an eye on the baby but at the same time prevent their child from stimuli outdoors. Moreover, purchasing goods from overseas shops has now become easier. It would be impossible to travel abroad to acquire particular products or services; however, now it only takes about one to two months to finally hold the goods on our hands. A great example for this is K-pop lovers from international fan living outsides Korea. Thanks to online shopping and transportation companies, they can obtain albums, light sticks and merches from their beloved idols.
In conclusion, although there are disadvantages of shopping online, I opine that technology helps shopping become more expedient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73919992927 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649659863946 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9203288196 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136458279646 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496705787969 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420019141019 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939657185566 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414607281916 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.