The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates how many shops closed and the amount of shops opened in a country in a 7-year period, from 2011 to 2018.
Overall, At first, the amount of store openings was higher than the one closings. However, after experiencing lots of fluctuations over 7 years, The closures had surpassed the openings in the figure.
In the first year of the period, the number of openings stood at 8500 and decreased sharply to 4000 in 2012. After that, Its figure increased gradually to 6000 in 2012. Then it dropped again to the 2012 figure. It was seen that there was a stable fluctuation between 2015 and 2017 and just grew by about 100. However, it continuously experienced a downward trend in the last year, dipping to only 3000.
Besides, the number of shops that failed to maintain initially stayed at approximately 6500 and varied between 6000 and 7000 in the next 4 years. It was witnessed that the figure for closures dropped significantly and hit the lowest point of only 500 shops in 2015. Nevertheless, It recovered magnificently to above 5000 in 2016 and remained stable until the end of the period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one closing', 'a closing', or simply 'closings'?
Suggestion: one closing; a closing; closings
...t of store openings was higher than the one closings. However, after experiencing lots of fl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, nevertheless, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66908789362 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2029093988 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187838021612 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614234739111 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819155650073 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12806913195 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938007860237 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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