In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In most of countries all over the world, there is a significant increase in the number of people moving from the countryside to the cities. This essay will discuss whether this change is beneficial or harmful to development nowadays.
From my perspective, the shift of population in places to live has had positive and negative impacts. The working-age population has more chances to approach the integration of countries and a wide range of opportunities for jobs in major cities, where most international corporations choose to trade products and look for a highly skilled workforce. Furthermore, people easily have access to well-equipped public infrastructure when moving to cities such as hospitals, administrative centers, …
On the other hand, this mass migration has resulted in placing a greater strain on public services due to the fact that the government cannot take care of all people properly at the same time and some citizens may be ignored and neglected. In addition, the abundance of the population in many large cities leads to a shortage of residence, which means that many people cannot find a place to live when they migrate to urban areas.
In conclusion, I would argue that the migration of rural people to urban regions is generally positive, as they now have greater opportunities to join the jobs market and are accessible to public infrastructure. However, from my point of view, the overwhelming of public services and the lack of residence are problems that the government should attempt to address.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
In most of countries all over the world, there is a signific...
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Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e government should attempt to address.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17269076305 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05115707941 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3822549503 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231820281544 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930459893338 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558910578467 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130245673545 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658380975702 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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