The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of household weekly income spent on different categories in a certain country.
Overall, in the period from 1968 to 2018, four in eight categories witnessed a fall and three increased. In 1968 the money spent on food was the highest and this place was taken over by leisure in 2018.
In 1968, families spent 35% of their weekly earnings on food, which was the highest. From then on, in 2018 this figure fell to over 15%, which decreased nearly a fifth of the expense. Clothing and footwear were the second highest in 1968 which occupied one in ten of weekly income and declined half of that percentage in 2018. The money spent on personal goods; fuel, and power were the third and fourth, respectively in 1968. In 2018, however, this figure decreased to below 5% of the household income.
The expense of housing stood the second place in 1968 which was a tenth and increased double to approximately 20% in 2018. Both the spending of the earnings on transport and leisure were nearly 10% in 2018. But then, in 2018 we saw a significant change in the first-place category which leisure rose to over a fifth of the weekly income making it the highest, and transport increased to about 15%. Whereas household goods remain steady in both 1968 and 2018 which reached nearly 10%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4653209088 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491304347826 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6739121875 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202708492661 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084333812386 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433666269363 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130929275555 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317532819806 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.