In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In many parts of the world moving to cities of hometown person, so the population in the ubran is increasing. In my opinion, go up the invidual has both positive and negative effects which will be discussed in this easy.
On the one hand, the tendency comes with two advantages for people. Firstly, a few city rises economy because the youger would possibly do work in the city and decication for the company. Moreover the business don’t lose time to recruitment. For example the students go ubran to interview. Who is likely to support the company saves money and time, while it use money to cover the running new cost and make much profit, and there fore the cities can grow up investment and improve the people lives. Secondly, the urban have diversity of people. This could be because many person from all over the country while they have change cultural, who would possibly atract local and internation tourists. As the result, creating a lot of cultural would rise tourism industry and traditional values.
On the other hand, this phenomenon creates two disadvantages increasing the indivual inside countries. To begin with, many people do work in the city meet to high compete, since every body want have high icome and good live, while they competes with a lot of people, however high abilitily recruit people, the enterprises and the person have low ability would possibly meet unemployment or be underpaed by their company. Thus, the social is likely to lose safe and everybody live in debt. In addition, the enviroment be poluted because litter in side, who need the person need have a house to well in the urban and cut down a lot of tree to give timber. While for a long time the environment will meet disater and the resident livesin area will possibly die or lose property.
In conclusion althought the people go to city has many disadvantages, there are number of positive effects that should be take into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rises'' or 'rise's'?
Suggestion: rises'; rise's
...antages for people. Firstly, a few city rises economy because the youger would possib...
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...he city and decication for the company. Moreover the business don’t lose time to recruit...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: therefore
...ning new cost and make much profit, and there fore the cities can grow up investment and i...
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Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
...ersity of people. This could be because many person from all over the country while they ha...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'compete'
Suggestion: compete
...ve high icome and good live, while they competes with a lot of people, however high abil...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taken'?
Suggestion: taken
...mber of positive effects that should be take into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81981981982 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51249975071 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0166723659 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170179165543 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515345611964 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708629833244 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133958369494 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769643765764 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.