In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem
As many people from several parts of the world have to deal with the rising costs of living, there is an urgent demanding in identifying the possible effects of that on the human beings, and the potential resolutions of such problems.
To begin with, on an individual level, the increase in the costs of living is not something that everyone can afford. citizens have to work harder in order to keep up with the rise. For example, if in the past, an individual had only one job, and that is sufficient to make an end meet, but now, people need two jobs or above to maintain the expense for living conditions. Furthermore, expense on medical will decrease due to the fact that people have spent too much for living’s costs. On a social level, in the case people with financial problems, it is not affordable for those to pay such high costs of living, nonetheless, those people may risk to commit crimes for money. This lead to social disorder and endanger the whole society in general. By virtue of such effects, solutions should be suggest to deal with the issue.
there are variety of solutions that can be considered to solve the problems. Firstly, single individual must have strict rules in budgeting the income so that money will not be wasted. Secondly, government shall enact laws to protect the citizens rights by making sure that the minimum wage workers receiving will be enough to cover the living expenditure.
In conclusion, I deem that although the grow in the costs of living may be a troublesome to certain, there are ways that can be implied to overcome such difficulty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Citizens
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Suggestion: suggested
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Suggestion: There
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... In conclusion, I deem that although the grow in the costs of living may be a trouble...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78776978417 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57245555077 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2024881553 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171679310107 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626871061505 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384342115501 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916117889584 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292752672402 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.