In many countries nowadays, people still live with their parents after marriage. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
It is a well-established fact that some young adults still live under the same roof with their parents after getting married in this modern society. Although living with parents would certainly undermine the marital harmony, I believe that this drawback will be eclipsed by the benefits.
It is understandable that sharing a living space with parents after marriage can possibly hinder the lives of newly-wed couples. The old generations may embrace some traditional ways of lifestyle, perspective, and mindset, which commonly leads to unwanted conflicts between family members. A case in point is that the first son in Asia countries has to live and take care of his parents, causing disputes between his mother and wife.
However, I would argue that the merits of living with parents are liable to defeat the disadvantages. Firstly, the dynamic lifestyles of contemporary young people often result in an intensive amount of workload and pressure, which makes them become negligible to their offspring and household chores. Therefore, parents can help to share the parenting and domestic works in order to relieve the burden young adults have been struggling with. Moreover, either the couples or their parents can save on a considerable amount of living expenses when sharing accommodation. To exemplify, such costs from rental, electricity or grocery can be reduced, which decreases the financial pressures for both, especially when living in metropolitan areas. Furthermore, since parents were responsible for their offspring’s care, there is a moral obligation for those children to take care of their parents when they become elderly. Consequently, living with senior parents is a way for young people to show their respect and fulfill filial duties to their parents for nurturing them.
In conclusion, despite some negative points, sharing a living space with parents after marriage is of great benefit to both young adults and their parents. As a result, people should consider the negative effects to take advantage of living with their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can
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Suggestion:
...advantage of living with their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40557275542 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83343477343 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9077051024 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294320328006 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114752644247 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650049641879 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193705080747 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04634100808 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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