In many countries nowadays, people still live with their parents after marriage. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
Despite the development of the world, in some countries thesedays, there are many young people choosing to live with their parents-in-law after getting married. It is believed that this has both advantages and disadvantages, but in my opinion, people can encounter more difficulties when they and their parents live under the same roof.
There are some salient troubles that both young and their parents can have when living together. First, there exist different opinions between two generations in a family, especially when a new member appears.Along with the changes in the society, people’s lives have become busier; therefore, they have a contrasting timetable compared with their parents, which can cause many problems. For example, most of the young nowadays have to go home from work late so they fail to cook dinner for the whole family, which may displease their parents-in-law because many old people consider household chores to be a responsibility of their daughter-in-law. Moreover, opinions on children of members in a family are relatively different. To be more specific, most young people nowadays do not want to have babies soon because they still want to enjoy life and work harder to make more money to prepare for becoming parents, but their parents think that they are too old to wait for a grandchild. Second, newly married couple or even others will not have private space to show their love. They cannot carefreely show affection to each other but always have to pay attention to their parents, which makes them gradually grow apart.
However, some people believe that living with parents after marriage brings more merits than disadvanatges First, grandparents can help to take care of grandchildren if their parents are overwhelmed in work and do not have enough time to look after them. Although many young people think that they can hire a nanny for their children, no one can replace blood relations. Second, living together can save a considerable sum of money for the young. Not everyone can afford to live separately because apart from buying a house, there are many costs they need to consider such as taxes, utility bills and the likes. Whereas, while living with their parents, they can save much money for future projects.
To sum up, with our modern life, people tend to choose to live seperately to avoid conflicts with their parents while some of them still live with their parents and it depends on their own conditions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07125307125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65729558163 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528255528256 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5890717211 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.6 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336264025392 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125719739503 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888530904119 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258668609841 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619823916353 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.