In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
In these days, most countries have undergone several significant developments in all aspect with the invention of numerous contemporary items that are favorable for human’s life. However, together with the advancement of the community, it also results in the decline of lots of animals and plants. From my perspective, this phenomenon is derived from distinctive reasons and can be countered by some appropriate measures.
The decline of animals and plants in some regions is brought about due to the following reasons. The main cause of this phenomenon is human activities, people now are carrying out several proposals of removing several forests which is the natural habitat for wild animal and house of countless a living organism of the kind exemplified by trees, shrubs, herbs and grasses to make room for the construction of some buildings with different purposes such as resort for the development of tourism industry or skyscrapers for both domestic and international visitors. Another reason that leads to this phenomenon is overexploiting wood or hunting for recreational purposes. In current society, some people cut down many trees or destroy some habitat of plants to improve their economic status or ignore the law not to hunt animals in the absence of permission of supreme authorities to keep hunting animals illegally without concerning about consequences which make most animals on the verge of extinction.
There are several measures that can be tackled by the government the reduction in the number of animals and plants. To begin with, the government should give a serious penalty for people who destroy forest intentionally because most people seem not to neglect the consequences of deforestation such as flood, erosion and others that can have negative impact on humans’ life, so the government should enact some practical laws to prevent the forest which is house of numerous animals and plants from being threatened by human activities. In addition, the government had better encourage their citizens to partake in some events that is beneficial to animals and plants such as planting trees to improve either ecosystem and natural habitat of animals or handing out flyers to raise awareness of people to protect the existence of animals and plants.
In short, the decline in the number of animals and plants is increasing without controlling. Thus, the government should pay more attention and pass down serious laws to protect the animals and ecosystem from decreasing in population because it plays a significant role in people’s lives
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... exemplified by trees, shrubs, herbs and grasses to make room for the constructio...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, in addition, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32843137255 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8811021696 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.119749544 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.166666667 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199891110948 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920198278198 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507301831455 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126667992736 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00967361367506 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... exemplified by trees, shrubs, herbs and grasses to make room for the constructio...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, in addition, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32843137255 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8811021696 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.119749544 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.166666667 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199891110948 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920198278198 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507301831455 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126667992736 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00967361367506 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.