In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?
In many nations around the world, life expectancy has increased more than it used to be. It is said that the large number of older people causes many problems for the government, while others claim the benefits of the old population outweigh the shortcomings. This essay will argue that the drawbacks of an ageing population offset the advantages entailed by this state of affairs, as a country with a great number of young people is better able to grow its economy.
One commonly cited advantage of an ageing population is that it reduces the strain on public services. This is because a larger number of elderly citizens require fewer facilities to be built to accommodate them. For example, the government may not need to invest more in the school system and education which requires additional public spending.
Despite this, there are a number of dramatic shortcomings to having an ageing population. First of all, having more older people creates a shortage of labour in all fields. This results from decreasing the working-age population, which leads to higher unemployment and economic stagnation. For instance, the employees working in the trading field are lacking, so the government may not import and export products at all.
Furthermore, a large ageing demographic also increases demand for healthcare, as elderly citizens are more likely to suffer from common illnesses than younger ones such as cold and flu, cough, allergies… In addition, countries such as Japan face challenges in looking after their older population and demand for elderly nursing is rising significantly.
In conclusion, although there are benefits of having an ageing population, it is clear that old people make a significant abundance of nations of the lack of workforce and increasing need for healthcare. On balance, I would argue that the government should attempt some policy to encourage having more younger generations to boost the country's economy and services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
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Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...attempt some policy to encourage having more younger generations to boost the countrys econo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26114649682 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85168988109 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3049953851 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336330757526 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109009118348 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064025143905 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176054792923 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679063776705 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.